自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn đã hiểu sai câu hỏi và trả lời bằng câu hỏi khác với từ sai (pie thay vì bike). Hãy chú ý nghe từ khóa, trả lời trực tiếp theo cấu trúc chủ đề -> chi tiết hỗ trợ, dùng tối đa 5 câu. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng “Yes, I did” hoặc “No, I didn’t”, sau đó cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tuổi, ai tặng, kỉ niệm).

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, a red one that my parents bought me for my birthday. I used to ride it to visit my friends and practice tricks in the park, which made my childhood very active.

建议: Bạn đã thay đổi câu hỏi và dùng cấu trúc không tự nhiên (“people love” không đúng ngữ pháp/ý). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, nêu quan điểm rồi giải thích với lý do và ví dụ, sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh lặp lại câu hỏi dưới dạng câu hỏi mới.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and there are also more bike lanes now to support cyclists.

× Did you have a pie when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'pie' instead of 'bike', which is a wrong lexical choice that changes the meaning and does not answer the examiner's question. Use the noun that matches the topic (bike). Also, the sentence structure and tense are correct, so only the noun needed correction.

× Do you think bikers are people love in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's sentence uses an incorrect structure 'people love' after 'are', which is ungrammatical in this context. The examiner asked about the popularity of bikes; the correct form is 'bikes are popular' or 'people love bikes'. Two possible corrections: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' or 'Do you think people in your country like bikes?'. The error is sentence structure and word order; replace with one of the correct forms so the meaning matches the question.