自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense, articles and pronouns (e.g. "I had a bike"; "on my fifth birthday"; "my parents gave it to me"). Avoid redundancy and limit to about 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes — I had a bike as a child. My parents gave it to me on my fifth birthday, and I loved it because it was small and bright red. I learned to ride it in the park near our house, so it has many good memories for me.

建议: Answer directly, use correct noun forms and articles, and connect ideas with linking words. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Fix grammar: use plural/singular correctly ("bicycles are popular", "students make it a habit"), and smooth connectors ("because", "for example"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many students ride them to school because cycling is cheap, convenient and suitable for short distances. For example, I often saw groups of students biking together in the morning.

× Definitely yes. I have my in my 5 years old birthday.

✓ Definitely yes. I received it on my fifth birthday.

The student used 'have' incorrectly for a past event and incorrect noun phrase 'in my 5 years old birthday'. This is a present tense issue because the event happened in the past. Use past simple 'received' for completed past actions and correct the age expression to 'my fifth birthday'. Use ordinal 'fifth' and the preposition 'on' with birthdays.

× My parents give it to me as a present so that I really love it and I is very cute for me.

✓ My parents gave it to me as a present, so I really loved it and it was very cute to me.

There are multiple past tense errors: 'give' should be past simple 'gave' because the giving happened in the past; 'really love' should be past 'really loved' to match the time frame; 'I is very cute for me' is ungrammatical — the bike 'was very cute to me' or 'I thought it was very cute'. Also add a comma before 'so' and use correct subject 'it' with the past verb 'was'. This correction aligns verbs with the past context and fixes pronoun/reference issues.

× Absolutely yes. Bike in Vietnamese are very popular.

✓ Absolutely yes. Bikes in Vietnam are very popular.

Use plural 'Bikes' not singular 'Bike' when referring generally to the category. Also 'Vietnamese' as a noun/adjective is awkward here; use 'Vietnam' as the country name in this construction. This fixes number agreement and noun usage.

× Many student have make it a habit to go to school by bike.

✓ Many students have made it a habit to go to school by bike.

'Student' must be plural 'students' to match 'many'. The verb phrase should be present perfect 'have made' (not 'have make') to indicate a habitual action established in the past continuing to the present. This fixes subject-verb number and verb form.

× The reason is because umm going by bike a convenient and easy to ride so.

✓ The reason is that going by bike is convenient and easy to ride.

This sentence has several issues: use 'is that' instead of 'is because' for clarity; 'going' is a gerund and needs a linking verb 'is' ('going by bike is convenient'); include the adjective 'convenient' with 'is'; 'easy to ride' is correct but should be joined with 'and'; remove the redundant filler 'so'. This corrects gerund usage and sentence structure.