自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is short and direct, which is fine for a yes/no question, but you should expand with one or two specific supporting details to demonstrate fluency and provide content. Keep the total to no more than five sentences and use a linking word if you add extra information. For example, mention what kind of bike it was, how often you rode it, or a memorable experience.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. As a result, I became quite confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.

建议: Your answer answers the question but is brief and contains a grammatical issue (use plural agreement and a smoother phrasing). Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, a reason, and a specific example or comparison, connected with linking words (e.g., because, however, for example). Keep responses natural and concise.

示例: Not really; most people prefer cars because public transport is unreliable and distances are long. For example, in my city many families own at least one car, so cycling is mostly limited to parks or short commutes.

× No, a lot of people in my country use car.

✓ No, a lot of people in my country use cars.

The noun 'car' should be plural after 'use' when referring to many people each using a vehicle. 'A lot of people' implies multiple individuals, so the countable noun must be plural ('cars'). To improve, match plural subjects with plural countable nouns (e.g., 'people use cars' or 'many people drive cars').