自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp thì quá khứ và động từ (ví dụ: 'rode', 'taught'), chia câu hợp lý và rõ ràng hơn; tránh lặp từ và lỗi từ vựng ('towel' -> 'town' hoặc 'local area'). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết (ai đi cùng, ai dạy) và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Ngoài ra chú ý phát âm các từ như 'taught' và 'bicycle'.

示例: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my town with my father, mother and sister. My father taught me how to ride, and we used to go for short family rides on weekends.

建议: Cần cải thiện tính mạch lạc và ngữ pháp: tránh lặp cấu trúc ('it makes people', 'it's help people'), dùng thì và động từ phù hợp (ví dụ: 'help people exercise', 'keep people healthy'). Thêm một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: tiện lợi, rẻ, tốt cho sức khỏe) và một ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Sử dụng từ liên kết như 'because' hoặc 'for example' để rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Yes. Bikes are very popular in my country. Many people cycle in the morning and evening because it is a cheap and convenient way to travel. For example, commuters often use bikes to get to work, and cycling is also a good form of daily exercise.

× Yes when I was a child I usually ride bicycles around my towel so I usually go ride by with my family, my father, my mom and my sister, so my father teached me how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I usually rode bicycles around my town, and I often rode with my family: my father, my mother, and my sister. My father taught me how to ride a bike.

The student mixes present tense with past-time expressions (when I was a child, usually) so the verb should be past tense (rode, taught). 'Teached' is incorrect; the past tense of 'teach' is 'taught'. 'Towel' is likely a wrong word and should be 'town'. Also punctuation and sentence structure need improvement to separate ideas. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for events in the past and correct irregular verb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes people usually ride by in the morning and in the afternoon because it makes people it's help people do exercise, make day strong and make day health every day.

✓ Yes. People usually ride in the morning and in the afternoon because it helps people exercise, makes their days more energetic, and improves their health.

The sentence has awkward and incorrect word choices and structures. 'Ride by' is incorrect; use 'ride'. 'It makes people it's help people do exercise' is ungrammatical and redundant; use 'it helps people exercise'. 'Make day strong' and 'make day health' are incorrect adjective/noun combinations; correct to 'makes their days more energetic' and 'improves their health'. Also 'helps' requires third person singular present tense to agree with 'it'. Suggestion: simplify clauses, use correct verbs and collocations, and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 13