自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. The examiner asked about having a bike, but you replied about writing. Give a direct topic sentence (yes/no) and then a short reason or detail. Keep it natural, up to 3–4 sentences, and use linking words if adding details.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a busy city where my parents preferred that I walk or take public transport for safety reasons. As a result, I rarely needed a bike and never learned to ride one.

建议: Your answer has the right idea but is vague and has grammar errors (e.g., “use us”). Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons or comparisons using linking words like 'however' or 'because'. Keep responses concise and avoid pronoun mistakes.

示例: Bikes used to be more popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. However, nowadays many people prefer cars, buses, and motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient in crowded cities. Still, cycling remains common for short trips and among students or fitness enthusiasts.

× No, because I don't know how to write it.

✓ No, because I didn't know how to ride one.

The student used 'write' instead of the correct verb 'ride' for using a bike; this is a lexical error but also creates a sentence that does not answer the question about having a bike. Additionally, the tense should match 'when you were a child' so past simple 'didn't know' is appropriate. Suggestion: use the verb 'ride' for bicycles and match tense to the time frame (childhood = past simple).

× Well, back then it was popular but right now we have different types of transportation where many people use us.

✓ Well, back then bikes were popular, but right now there are different types of transportation that many people use.

Several issues: 'it was popular' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural so use 'bikes were popular' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'we have different types of transportation' incorrectly uses 'we' and suggests speakers own the transport; use 'there are different types of transportation' to indicate existence (there be). Also 'where many people use us' wrongly uses 'us' to refer to transportation; use 'that many people use' to correctly refer to 'different types of transportation'. Suggestion: match subject number with verb, use 'there are' for existence, and use 'that' or 'which' + subject to refer to things rather than 'us'.