自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 用时态和语法更准确地回答，并给出简短的原因或细节来丰富回答。避免句子过于简短或语法错误。你可以先用一句话直接回答，然后用一两句补充说明背景或原因，保持总句子不超过5句。

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and we usually walked or took public transport. I sometimes borrowed a friend's bike to ride in the park.

建议: 改善语法和表达的流畅性，使用更自然的词汇搭配并给出具体例子或原因。使用连接词使陈述更连贯，例如 because, for example, or especially。保持回答在最多5句内。

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use shared bikes in cities to commute short distances. In smaller towns, bicycles are still a common means of daily transport.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

错误类型：过去时错误。说明：句子描述过去（“when I was a child”），主句应使用过去时。原句使用现在时的助动词“do”+“n't have”与时间状语矛盾。建议：将“do not have”改为过去式“did not have”或缩写“didn't have”。

× Yes, China has a lot of bikes and bikes is people's daily life.

✓ Yes, China has a lot of bikes, and bikes are part of people's daily life.

错误类型：主谓一致与表达不当。说明：复数名词“bikes”应配合复数动词“are”；另外“bikes is people's daily life”表达不自然，需改为“are part of people's daily life”（是日常生活的一部分）。建议：把“is”改为“are”，并用更自然的短语“part of people's daily life”来表达“是人们日常生活的一部分”。