自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Постарайтесь давать более связный и грамматически правильный ответ. Начните с чётного предложения, подтверждающего факт, затем добавьте подробности: чья была велосипед, как часто вы им пользовались и почему. Используйте простые связки (for example, but, because) и избегайте лишних слов. Также исправьте порядок слов и артикли (a/the).

示例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It actually belonged to my brother, and we took turns riding it. We used it only occasionally because we often walked to school. For example, I usually rode it on weekends.

建议: Ответ неясен и запутан — сосредоточьтесь на однозначном мнении, затем приведите 1–2 конкретных причины или примера, используя связки (however, because, due to). Избегайте бессмысленных слов и старайтесь правильно строить предложения (subject + verb + object).

示例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country anymore because many people prefer cars and public transport. However, bicycles are still common among students and in some cities where cycling lanes exist because they are cheap and good for short trips.

× Yes I did but it's not my bike it's bike my brother and I ride on it maybe less

✓ Yes, I did, but it wasn't my bike; it was my brother's bike that we rode, although rarely.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order ('it's bike my brother and I ride on it'), missing possession (should be 'my brother's bike'), tense mismatch ('did' refers to past so use past 'was'), and unclear adverb placement ('maybe less' is ungrammatical). Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past), use proper possessive form for ownership, place adverbs like 'rarely' at the end or before the verb, and reorder clause to be clear. Example: 'Yes, I did, but it wasn't my bike; it was my brother's bike that we rode, although rarely.'

× I think it can be eat but in our era it's it can't be so because in a way innovations and past present technology.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular now because of innovations and modern technology.

The original has several grammatical and word-choice errors: 'can be eat' is meaningless (mixes modal + passive + wrong verb form), 'in our era' is acceptable but awkward with 'now', duplicate 'it's it', and 'past present technology' is unclear. Suggestion: express opinion with appropriate verbs ('I think' or 'I don't think'), use correct adjective 'popular', and use 'modern' or 'current' to describe technology. Keep sentence simple: 'I don't think bikes are very popular now because of innovations and modern technology.'