自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要注意时态一致并且更自然地表达个人经历。避免使用与时间相矛盾的现在时（例如“I don't have”）来描述过去。可以用一到两句简短补充原因或感受，保持句子数量在五句以内，并使用连接词使叙述更连贯。举例：先用主题句直接回答，再用原因或感受作支持说明。

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family was quite poor then, so my parents couldn't afford one. I remember walking long distances to school, which made me wish I had a bike.

建议: 回答要完整，避免断句或未完成的句子；注意时态和衔接词使用，使论述更有逻辑。可以先给出直接判断（Yes/No），然后用具体时间点、比较或原因支持观点，最后作简单总结。尽量提供具体细节（例如城市与农村的差异、共享单车的变化等）。

示例: Yes, bikes used to be very popular in China about twenty years ago. At that time most families couldn't afford cars or motorcycles, so bicycles were the main way to get around. Nowadays, with more cars and bike-sharing services, bicycles are still common but used differently.

× No, I don't have a bike because I was raised in a poor family and my parents couldn't afford the bike for me at that time.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I was raised in a poor family and my parents couldn't afford a bike for me at that time.

问题类型参考：5（过去时问题）、22（冠词错误）、27（主谓一致/时态一致）。说明：在回答过去是否拥有自行车时应使用一般过去时，所以“don't have”应改为“didn't have”。此外，“the bike”在此处并非特指某一辆车，使用不定冠词“a bike”更合适。建议：回忆过去事实时统一使用过去时（did / didn't），并判断名词是否为特指来选用定冠词或不定冠词。

× Yeah, at least at that time about twenty years ago. When I was a child most of the Chinese people could not afford a car or motorbike. So their first choice is always a bike and they need to

✓ Yeah, at least at that time, about twenty years ago. When I was a child, most Chinese people could not afford a car or motorbike. So their first choice was usually a bike and they needed to

问题类型参考：6（现在时问题）、5（过去时问题）、22（冠词/限定词错误）。说明：讲话谈及过去情况，应保持过去时态一致，故将“is”改为过去式“was”，将“need”改为过去式“needed”。另外“most of the Chinese people”在此语境下可简化为“most Chinese people”。句末不完整，应补完句子或结束句子。建议：描述过去习惯或普遍事实时，全部动词使用过去时；注意句子完整性并删除不必要的限定词“of the”。