自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Pronunciation, grammar and accuracy need improvement. Use past tense consistently, correct vocabulary (bike not bite), and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Be specific about the bike and how you used it.

示例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. It was a mini bike made in Japan, and I rode it almost every day to visit friends. Because it was light and durable, I felt very confident riding it around my neighborhood.

建议: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement), avoid repetition, and finish your answer with a clear reason or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and give a specific instance to support your opinion.

示例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Vietnam because many cities have narrow streets where cars cannot go easily. For example, people often use motorbikes to go to markets or short-distance jobs, since they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes, I have a bite when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student uses present perfect 'have' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'had' to match the past time. Also 'bite' is a spelling error; the correct noun is 'bike'. Suggestion: use 'had' for possessions in a finished past and check spelling.'

× That is a mini bike and is made from Japan.

✓ It was a mini bike and was made in Japan.

The context is past (when the student was a child), so verbs should be in the past tense: 'was' not 'is'. Also use the preposition 'in' with countries: 'made in Japan'. Suggestion: match tense to context and use correct preposition with 'made'.'

× I use it for everyday.

✓ I used it every day.

The student is speaking about a habitual action in the past, so simple past 'used' is required rather than present 'use'. 'Every day' is two words when meaning 'each day'. Suggestion: use 'used' and write 'every day' as two words.

× Yes, in Vietnam, I think bikes and bicycles are popular because Vietnam have many small streets streets.

✓ Yes, in Vietnam, I think bikes and bicycles are popular because Vietnam has many small streets.

The subject 'Vietnam' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has', not 'have'. Remove the repeated word 'streets'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and proofread to remove duplicate words.'

× So I think bikes and bicycles is very easy

✓ So I think bikes and bicycles are very convenient.

The plural subject 'bikes and bicycles' needs the plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Also 'easy' is not the best adjective for vehicles; 'convenient' better expresses suitability for small streets. Suggestion: use 'are' with plural subjects and choose an appropriate adjective.