自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally natural and directly addresses the question, with relevant personal detail. To improve, make the response more concise, avoid filler words (e.g., "uh"), correct small grammar points (use past tense consistently and plural/singular forms), and use one or two linking words to make the sequence of events clearer. Also limit to around 3–4 sentences. For example, replace "has" with "had" and "2 little assisting wheels" with "two training wheels."

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about four years old; it originally had four wheels, and when I got older my family removed the two training wheels so I could learn to ride on two wheels.

建议: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but has grammar errors (subject–verb agreement: "bikes are" not "bikes is"), informal fillers ("Umm," "like," "stuff"), and an unfinished ending. Improve coherence by using linking phrases (e.g., "However," "For example,") and provide a clear concluding opinion. Be more specific about where and why people use bikes. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

示例: I think bikes are fairly popular, but not widely used for commuting. People tend to ride them within neighborhoods for exercise or recreation. However, only a small number use bicycles for daily travel because of limited cycling infrastructure and long commuting distances.

× I had a bike that has four wheels and as I got older, uh, my family took off the back wheels, 2 little assisting wheels on the bike and so I just kept riding it and learned how to ride a bike with two wheels.

✓ I had a bike that had four wheels, and as I got older my family removed the two little training wheels, so I kept riding it and learned to ride a bike with two wheels.

Mixed present and past tenses: the sentence begins in the past (I had) but uses present has; this creates inconsistency. Use past tense consistently for past events (had, had, removed, kept, learned). Also replace informal phrasing (assisting wheels) with standard term training wheels and simplify conjunctions for clarity.

× Umm I think bikes in my country is quite popular but not popular enough.

✓ Umm I think bikes in my country are quite popular but not popular enough.

Subject-verb agreement: the plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are, not is. Ensure verb agrees in number with its subject.

× People normally only use it inside of the neighborhood but they don't really use it to travel from one place to another.

✓ People normally only use them inside the neighborhood, but they don't really use them to travel from one place to another.

Pronoun and preposition issues: use them to match plural bikes; use inside the neighborhood (no of). Also keep pronouns consistent (them) and plural to match subject. This improves grammatical agreement and natural phrasing.

× Or most of them also use it during like bike competitions and stuff but not.

✓ Or most of them also use bikes for competitions and events, but not for regular travel.

Pronoun and informal filler issues: use bikes (plural) or them instead of it to match plural subject. Remove fillers like like and stuff and complete the sentence (but not for regular travel) to clarify meaning and use appropriate preposition for purpose (for competitions).