自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Pronunciation, grammar and clarity need improvement. Correct key words ("bias" → "a bike"). Use past tense consistently and avoid unnecessary repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences). For example, say when you got the bike, where you rode, and who you rode with.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it in the park near my home, and I often rode with my friends after school. It helped me feel independent and active.

建议: Improve grammar, sentence structure and coherence. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and use linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Avoid vague phrases like "it depends" repeated without details. Mention factors such as age, location or convenience to support your view.

示例: I think bicycles are moderately popular in Thailand because younger people and students often use them for short trips. However, many adults prefer motorcycles or cars for longer distances and convenience, especially in cities with heavy traffic.

× Yes, I used to have bias when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence contains a word choice error: 'bias' is incorrect in this context; the intended noun is 'bike'. This is not a tense error but a lexical mistake. However, since the sentence uses 'used to' correctly to describe a habitual past action, keep the past tense. Suggestion: replace 'bias' with 'bike' to convey the correct meaning.

× I practice riding near my home and often rode with my friends after school

✓ I practiced riding near my home and often rode with my friends after school.

The sentence mixes present tense 'practice' with past tense 'rode', causing a tense inconsistency. The context is childhood (past), so both verbs should be in the past tense. Change 'practice' to 'practiced' to match the past habitual action. Also add a period at the end.

× I think it's depend the generation have to use bikes.

✓ I think it depends on the generation whether they have to use bikes.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect verb form 'depend' (should be 'depends' for third-person singular subject 'it'), missing preposition 'on', and unclear clause structure. Also 'generation have' should be 'they have' or 'people of that generation have' to match pronoun agreement. The corrected sentence uses present tense 'depends' and adds 'on' and 'whether' to create a proper subordinate clause.

× It depends the person that feel convenient to use a bike as well.

✓ It depends on the person who feels comfortable using a bike as well.

Problems: missing preposition 'on' after 'depends', incorrect relative pronoun 'that' is acceptable but 'who' is better for people, and verb agreement 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular 'person'. Also 'convenient to use' is awkward; 'feels comfortable using' is more natural. Adjust accordingly.

× I think in Thailand it's not too much to use a bike, but anyway it's depend on the person.

✓ I think in Thailand people do not use bikes very much, but anyway it depends on the person.

Several issues: 'it's not too much to use a bike' is ungrammatical and awkward—use 'people do not use bikes very much' to express frequency in present tense. Also 'it's depend' should be 'it depends' for third-person singular. Maintain present tense and correct subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: rephrase for naturalness and grammaticality.