自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar (tense and article use), make the response more natural and concise, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, my uncle owned a bike, so I often practised riding it in his yard, which helped me learn basic skills and confidence.

建议: Start with a clear, direct topic sentence, correct tense and article usage, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words like "however" or "therefore" to connect ideas and keep sentences concise.

示例: Bicycles weren’t very popular traditionally, but they became much more common during the pandemic. This was because public transport was limited, so many people started using bikes to commute to work and run errands.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a kid since we can't afford it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a kid because we couldn't afford one.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' and present modal 'can't' with a past time frame 'when I was a kid.' Use past tense to match the past time frame: 'didn't have' and 'couldn't afford.' Also replace 'since' with 'because' for clearer causal meaning and use 'one' as a pronoun for 'a bike.'

× But in our province my uncle had the bike where I used to practice.

✓ But in our province my uncle had a bike that I used to practice on.

The original uses 'the bike' (definite article) and 'where I used to practice' incorrectly. Use the indefinite 'a bike' because it was non-specific, and the relative clause should be 'that I used to practice on' to show the action of practicing riding the bike. Placing the preposition 'on' at the end is natural in this clause.

× No, but it became popular during pandemic since there is a limited vehicle for transportation.

✓ No, but it became popular during the pandemic because there were limited vehicles for transportation.

The phrase 'during pandemic' needs the definite article 'the pandemic.' Also the cause clause should match past tense 'became' with past 'were limited' rather than present 'is a limited vehicle.' Use plural 'vehicles' because 'limited vehicles' is general and matches plural agreement.

× So most of the people used bicycle for their work.

✓ So most people used bicycles for their work.

Use 'most people' rather than 'most of the people' for naturalness, and make 'bicycle' plural ('bicycles') to agree with the plural subject. Also 'for their work' is acceptable; no tense change needed because context is past.