自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答太简短且缺乏细节。建议给出主题句并补充一到两句具体细节，例如你什么时候有的、是谁给你的、你如何使用它或有无难忘经历，使用连接词让表达更连贯。尽量控制在最多5句之内。

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, a small red one my parents bought for my birthday. I loved riding it around the neighborhood every afternoon, and I remember learning to balance with my father’s help.

建议: 回答直接但过于笼统，缺乏支持性细节和理由。建议先给出观点，然后用一两句说明原因（例如在城市/农村的使用场景、通勤或休闲、政府政策或基础设施），并使用连接词（because, for example, for instance）使回答更流畅。控制在最多5句。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many bike lanes and shared bike services that make riding convenient and affordable.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该句为对过去时问题（Did you have a bike when you were a child?）的简短肯定回答，使用助动词 did 已包含过去时，句子语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

该句为对一般现在时问题（Do you think bikes are popular in your country?）的肯定回答，使用一般现在时 are 与主语 bikes（复数）一致，语法正确，无需修改。