自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng về thì và cấu trúc ngữ pháp (ví dụ: dùng 'used to have' thay vì 'used to had'). Tránh những từ thừa như 'uh' và sửa lỗi về 'ride car' (ý là 'ride a bike' hoặc 'drive a car'). Mở rộng thêm một câu ngắn giải thích kỷ niệm cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và sinh động hơn. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để kết nối ý.

示例: Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. My dad taught me how to ride it properly because he wanted me to be confident. I remember practicing in the park near our house every weekend, so I learned quickly.

建议: Câu trả lời cần cấu trúc rõ ràng: bắt đầu với một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/Not really), sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh cấu trúc lủng củng và chia động từ đúng (ví dụ: 'the most popular form of transportation is the motorbike'). Thêm một ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn với xe đạp để làm nội dung cụ thể hơn. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để liên kết ý.

示例: Not really. The most popular form of transportation in my country is the motorbike because it is fast and convenient for short trips. For example, many families use motorbikes to go to the market, and you can carry another person easily, so bikes are less common.

× Uh yes, I used to had a bike to ride and my dad who usually taught me how to ride car uh properly.

✓ Uh yes, I used to have a bike to ride, and my dad usually taught me how to ride a car properly.

The student mixed 'used to' (which is followed by the base form of the verb) with the past form 'had'. Use 'used to have'. Also there are article and word-order issues: 'how to ride car' needs the article 'a' before 'car'. Removed the unnecessary relative pronoun 'who' and adjusted comma placement for clarity. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb (used to have), include articles where needed (a car), and keep clauses concise.

× Not popular as the most popular transportation was motorbike because people usually go out with motorbike and then you can carry with another person also.

✓ Not really; the most popular transportation is the motorbike because people usually go out by motorbike, and you can carry another person on it.

The student used past tense 'was' but is describing a general present fact, so use present tense 'is'. Also incorrect prepositions: use 'by motorbike' or 'on a motorbike' instead of 'with motorbike'. 'Carry with another person' is incorrect; say 'carry another person on it'. Added articles 'the' and 'a' for natural English. Suggestion: match tense to the fact (present), use correct prepositions for transport ('by' or 'on'), and include articles where required.