自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Clarify the question first and answer directly in past tense. Use a simple topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details. Correct grammar: use ‘you were a child’ not ‘you have a child’. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a gift for my eighth birthday and rode it to school every day. Because my neighborhood was quiet and safe, I learned to ride fast and often raced with friends.

建议: Answer directly and avoid unclear abbreviations. Use a clear subject and verb, and add one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words (e.g., because, therefore). Avoid word order mistakes like ‘our my country’.

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have built bike lanes recently, so more commuters and students choose cycling over driving.

× Did you have a bike when you have a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used present tense 'have' in a question that refers to past time introduced by 'Did'. This is a tense inconsistency. Use past tense 'were' to match 'Did' and the past time frame 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: match tenses in time clauses (use past tense after 'did' and for past states).

× US bikes are popular in our my country.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country.

The student used two possessive pronouns 'our' and 'my' together, which is incorrect. Also 'US' appears unnecessary and likely a typo. Use a single possessive determiner that fits the speaker ('our country' if speaking for a group). Suggestion: choose the correct pronoun and remove redundant words; say 'Bikes are popular in our country.'