自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (since it's about childhood), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because/so). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–3 sentences. Also correct tense errors and use articles and collocations correctly (e.g., "ride a bicycle", "I didn't" → "I didn't have one").

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I tried riding a bicycle once but I kept falling, so I was afraid of getting hurt and avoided learning to ride.

建议: Answer directly, then support with specific reasons and a linking word. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "bikes are not popular"; "unlike Taiwan, our country"; "infrastructure for cyclists"). Give one concrete example or consequence to make it more convincing. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: No, bikes are not very popular in my country. Unlike Taiwan, we lack dedicated cycle lanes and safe road markings, so many people prefer cars or motorbikes for safety and convenience.

× No I don't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'I don't' is present tense; change to 'I didn't' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past time (e.g., 'I didn't').

× I don't like to ride bicycle when I was a child because I would try to ride bicycle when I was a child and I would trip over something and I don't like the idea of hurting myself so I didn't.

✓ I didn't like riding a bicycle when I was a child because I tried to ride a bicycle and I would trip over things, and I didn't like the idea of hurting myself, so I stopped.

Multiple tense inconsistencies and phrasing issues: 'I don't like' should be past ('I didn't like') to match 'when I was a child'. Use the gerund 'riding' after 'like' in past: 'liked riding'. 'Ride bicycle' needs an article: 'a bicycle'. Repetition of 'when I was a child' is unnecessary. 'I would try to ride' is awkward; 'I tried to ride' is a simple past description. 'Trip over something' should be plural or 'something' can remain but better 'things' for general experience. Ending with 'so I didn't' is incomplete; specify what you didn't do or 'so I stopped' clarifies the result. Suggestions: Match tense to time expressions, use 'like' + gerund for preferences, include articles before singular countable nouns, avoid unnecessary repetition, and make the final clause clear.

× It's not popular in my country.

✓ They're not popular in my country.

The question asked about 'bikes' (plural). 'It's not popular' uses singular 'it' and is incorrect for plural subject. Use 'they're' (they are) to refer to bikes, and 'popular' stays the same. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree in number with the noun they refer to.

× Our country unlike Taiwan doesn't have a good infrastructure to support bikers to bike safely on the streets.

✓ Our country, unlike Taiwan, doesn't have good infrastructure to allow cyclists to ride safely on the streets.

'A good infrastructure' is awkward; 'infrastructure' is usually uncountable and doesn't need 'a'. 'Support bikers to bike' is unnatural: use 'allow' or 'enable cyclists to ride'. 'Bikers' is casual; 'cyclists' is more appropriate. Also punctuation with commas around the contrast phrase improves clarity. Suggestions: Use uncountable nouns without articles ('good infrastructure'), prefer more natural verb patterns ('allow/enable someone to do something'), and use commas to set off clauses.