自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar (tense consistency, articles, plurals) and sentence clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). For example, use past tense for past situations, include articles where needed, and replace vague phrases with precise ones.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I walked everywhere, such as to school and to visit friends, which helped me become quite fit.

建议: Improve pronunciation in actual speech, and correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'nowadays', 'useful' or 'common', avoid repeated words). Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words to support your view.

示例: Yes, nowadays bikes are very common in my country. Many people prefer them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips, and I see dozens of riders on the streets every morning and evening.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because that time my father did not have money for broad bike for me and I walk on walk daily basis to go anywhere

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because at that time my father did not have money to buy a proper bike for me, and I walked everywhere on a daily basis to go anywhere.

Multiple tense errors: 'don't have' is present tense but the context is past, so use 'did not have'. 'That time' should be 'at that time'. 'For broad bike' is incorrect vocabulary; use 'to buy a proper bike'. 'I walk' should be past 'I walked'. Also improve word order and add articles for clarity. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for childhood events and use correct verbs (did not have, did not have money to buy, walked).

× Yes Noraday I think bikes are mostly usable thing in our country because everyone buy bike for horse for himself himself and his family. I see on a daily basis a lot of people

✓ Yes, nowadays I think bikes are very commonly used in our country because everyone buys a bike for themselves and their family. I see a lot of people doing so on a daily basis.

Several present-tense and agreement problems: 'Noraday' should be 'nowadays'. 'Mostly usable thing' is unnatural; use 'very commonly used' or 'popular'. 'Everyone buy' needs third-person singular agreement 'everyone buys' (subject-verb agreement). 'For horse' is incorrect vocabulary; likely intended 'for themselves' or 'for transport'; use 'for themselves'. Repeated 'himself himself' should be 'themselves and their'. Final fragment 'I see on a daily basis a lot of people' needs completion: 'I see a lot of people doing so on a daily basis.' Maintain present simple for general truths and correct subject-verb agreement.