自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu tính rõ ràng, logic và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến thông điệp khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi đưa thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ; tránh thông tin không liên quan (ví dụ: “when I write this” không phù hợp). Sửa ngữ pháp (thì, đảo ngữ, đại từ) và dùng liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I did. I received my first bike when I was about ten, as a birthday present. At first I felt nervous about learning to ride, but after a few lessons I became confident and rode it every day to visit friends.

建议: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần ngôn ngữ chính xác hơn và chi tiết cụ thể hơn để thuyết phục (ví dụ: số liệu, so sánh, hoàn cảnh sử dụng). Chú ý ngữ pháp (dùng danh từ số ít/ nhiều: “bikes are”, hoặc “they are”) và thêm liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country. They are affordable and cheap to maintain, so many people use them for short trips or commuting. For example, in cities many students and workers prefer bikes over cars because they save money and avoid traffic.

× Yes, of course I remember that 10 years ago I got my own bike, especially on my birthday, you know, I very scared and worried about trying something new. Therefore, when I write this.

✓ Yes, of course I remember that 10 years ago I got my own bike, especially on my birthday. I was very scared and worried about trying something new, so I didn't ride it at first.

The sentence contains past tense errors and sentence-structure problems. 'I very scared' is missing the past-tense auxiliary 'was' (past simple: 'I was very scared'). The original also mixes present ('I remember') with past events; using past simple for feelings/actions that occurred 10 years ago keeps tense consistent. 'Therefore, when I write this' is ungrammatical and irrelevant; it should be replaced with a past-tense consequence such as 'so I didn't ride it at first.' Suggestion: use 'was' for past states and restructure into two clear sentences to express the event and the reaction. Grammar problem type ID:5

× From my perspective, I definitely think so. Bike is quite a common vehicle in my country due to the cheaper and easier to maintain of it.

✓ From my perspective, I definitely think so. Bikes are quite common vehicles in my country because they are cheaper and easier to maintain.

Errors: 'Bike is' should be plural 'Bikes are' to refer to bikes in general (singular/plural issue). The phrase 'due to the cheaper and easier to maintain of it' is ungrammatical: misuse of adjectives/nouns and pronoun. Rephrase: 'because they are cheaper and easier to maintain.' Suggestion: use plural form when speaking generally about a category and use a clear clause ('because they are...') to describe reasons; include the verb 'are' for the predicate.