自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc: trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động xảy ra trong quá khứ, tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồn (uh, um). Cụ thể: (1) Mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + brief statement). (2) Dùng 1–2 câu bổ sung với chi tiết cụ thể (ai, khi nào, ở đâu, với ai). (3) Tránh lan man và sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (ví dụ: every day → every day; I rode → I used to ride).

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it almost every day with my friends around our neighborhood after school. We often raced each other to the small park near my house, which was great fun and kept us very active.

建议: Cần tổ chức câu rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp: trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể và dùng linking words (for example, because, so). Sửa ngữ pháp (bikes are popular; people ride together; in the mornings/afternoons). Tránh filler và sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự hợp lý.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, every morning and afternoon lots of families and groups of friends ride together in parks and on quiet streets, which makes cycling a common sight.

× There's when we're choice.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The original sentence has broken structure and incorrect contractions. Use a clear past-tense clause 'When I was a child' and a simple past 'I had a bike' to answer a past possession question. Ensure subject and verb are present and in correct order.

× I, I ride a bike every days with my friends.

✓ I rode a bike every day with my friends.

The question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'rode' rather than present 'ride'. Also 'every day' is two words and singular after 'every'. Use past simple for habitual actions in the past.

× Umm, but uh, aren't the schools I choose, uh, go to rice spice.

✓ But I didn't go to school to study cycling.

The original is unintelligible and mixes negatives and wrong vocabulary. Identify intended meaning (likely 'I didn't go to bike school'). Use correct negative past form 'didn't go' and appropriate nouns/verbs. Keep simple clear clauses.

× Yes, uh, I believe us by a very popular in my, in my country because, uh, every morning and afternoons, uh, more people's rights to buy together near a park in my house.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because every morning and afternoon many people ride them together near the park by my house.

Multiple issues: wrong pronouns and word order. Use 'I think' not 'I believe us by'. Use plural 'bikes are' and adjective 'very popular'. Time expressions 'every morning and afternoon' are singular forms. Use 'many people' for quantity, and correct verb 'ride' for using bikes. Arrange phrase order: 'near the park by my house' for clarity.