自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, ngữ pháp nhiều lỗi và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No + brief statement), sau đó cung cấp 1–2 câu bổ sung với chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại xe, tần suất sử dụng, kỷ niệm). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để liên kết ý (e.g., because, so, and). Giữ tổng độ dài không quá 5 câu.

示例: No, I didn’t really have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it wasn’t safe for me, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. Occasionally I borrowed a cousin’s bike during holidays, but I never owned one myself.

建议: Câu trả lời lộn xộn, thiếu cấu trúc và nhiều từ không phù hợp ("The size", "Go to dial Q3"). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + brief statement), rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể (chi phí, tiện lợi, môi trường) và đưa ví dụ. Dùng liên từ (e.g., because, therefore, however) để làm ý mạch lạc. Giữ trong 3–4 câu.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They are cheap and easy to use for short trips, so many people prefer them to cars. For example, I often see students cycling to university to avoid traffic and save money.

× What I have to look at when I was a child and I don't love it.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child and I didn't like it.

The sentence has multiple structure and tense issues. The speaker used present tense 'have' and present 'don't love' while referring to the past, causing tense inconsistency (present vs past). Also the clause 'What I have to look at' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use a simple past negative 'didn't have' and 'didn't like' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: Use clear subject + past auxiliary 'did' for negatives in past ('I didn't have', 'I didn't like').

× The size is quite popular in my country because for a student. Go to dial Q3.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient for students.

This sentence is ungrammatical and fragmented. 'The size is quite popular' misuses 'size' instead of 'bikes' and keeps present tense but the phrasing is wrong. The fragment 'because for a student' lacks a verb and clear subject. Also 'Go to dial Q3' appears irrelevant or corrupted. Correct the subject to 'Bikes', use present simple 'are' for general fact, and complete the reason clause with 'they are convenient for students.' Suggestion: State general facts with present simple and provide a full clause after 'because' (subject + verb + object).