自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答重复了考官的问题且时态错误，缺乏直接陈述和细节。改进时要：1) 直接用陈述句回答（例如：Yes, I did / No, I didn’t）；2) 使用正确时态（过去式）；3) 如果有必要，补充1–2句具体细节（例如什么时候得到的、骑车的频率或有趣的回忆），总句数不超过5句；4) 使用连接词（e.g. because, so, when）使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it to school almost every day because my parents wanted me to be active. I remember learning to balance on a quiet street near our house, which was both scary and exciting.

建议: 回答含混且逻辑不清，‘technology’与骑自行车的关系不明确。改进时要：1) 开门见山给出立场（Yes, they are popular / No, not very popular）；2) 说明原因并提供具体例子或比较（例如通勤、环保、共享单车）；3) 使用连接词（because, for example, however）使论述连贯；4) 保持句数在5句以内并使用恰当词汇。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and running errands. For example, bike-sharing schemes have become common in big cities, and some people prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money.

× Did you have a bike when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

错误类型：现在时使用错误。此句问过去是否拥有自行车，主句使用助动词 did 已经表明是过去时，时间状语“when you are a child”却用了现在时的 are，与过去时不一致。应将 are 改为过去时 were。建议：注意时间状语与句子时态一致，表示过去时的从句也要用过去时。

× With the development of technology, people usually use them to work.

✓ With the development of technology, people usually use bikes to commute to work.

错误类型：现在时搭配不清或代词指代不明。原句中 use them 指代不明确（examiner 提问关于自行车），且 work 一词常与动词搭配需表示“去上班/通勤”等，原句表达不够自然。虽然时态（现在时）本身可接受，但问题清单要求只改列出的类型，此处归为现在时使用或搭配问题（Present tense issue）并改为更自然、明确的表达。建议：当代词指代前文名词时确保清晰，描述习惯性动作用 usually + 动词不带 -ing，必要时用更准确动词如 commute。