自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question, so it didn’t answer. To improve, give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how you used it, who taught you). Use linking words like “and” or “so” if adding a second idea. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven, and my father taught me to ride in the park. I used it almost every day to visit friends and explore the neighborhood.

建议: Your answer gives an opinion but has grammatical errors, awkward phrasing, and a weak example. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural form and cause connectors), and a specific supporting detail or statistic. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” and avoid repetition. Limit to up to five sentences.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily transport. For example, I often see crowded bike lanes during rush hour, and students commonly cycle to school. This popularity is partly due to low petrol prices and well-maintained cycle paths in many cities.

× Yes, I think that bike is popular in my country 'cause every time I walk in the street and the bike always walk by my side.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country, because whenever I walk in the street bikes often pass by my side.

The original sentence has several errors falling under singular/plural and subject-verb agreement. 'that bike' should be plural 'bikes' when talking generally about popularity (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'the bike always walk' is incorrect because plural subject 'bikes' requires the plural verb 'walk' or better 'pass', and singular 'bike' would require 'walks' (subject-verb agreement, Grammar Problem Type 27). Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements ('bikes are popular'), keep verb forms consistent with the noun ('bikes pass' or 'bikes often pass'), replace informal ' 'cause' with 'because', and use 'whenever' for repeated occasions.