自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and expand briefly. Use past tense for past experiences, give a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and under five sentences. Use linking words if adding details.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every weekend. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt safe while I was learning, and later I rode it without them.

建议: Make the response grammatically correct, be specific about why bikes are popular, and avoid unclear words (e.g., 'pipe'). Start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and leisure. For example, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic, and there are also dedicated bike paths in many cities that make cycling safer.

× Yes, I do have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'I do have' is present tense and ungrammatical here. Use 'I did' or a fuller sentence 'Yes, I did' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: answer past questions with past tense verbs (did/had).

× Yes, I do think it is very popular in our country since we use pipe for fun but also for transportation.

✓ Yes, I do think they are very popular in our country since we use bikes for fun but also for transportation.

The student mixes singular and plural and uses present references incorrectly. The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). 'It is very popular' incorrectly uses singular pronoun and 'pipe' appears to be a typo for 'bike' or 'bicycle'. Use 'they are' to agree with plural 'bikes' and 'bikes' or 'bicycles' instead of 'pipe'. Maintain present tense for general statements about popularity. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun (bikes -> they/are) and correct incorrect word choices; say 'they are very popular' or 'bicycles are very popular'. Also keep consistent vocabulary: 'for fun and for transportation.'