自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use past tense and give a brief reason or detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two supporting details (max 5 sentences). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas. For example, mention where you lived, whether your family owned one, or how you traveled instead.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because we lived in a busy city and my parents preferred I walk or take the bus. As a result, I usually walked to school or went with my mother, so I didn’t learn to ride until I was older.

建议: Give a fuller answer with specific reasons and an example. Begin with a clear opinion, then use linking words (for example, because, however, therefore) to explain factors such as traffic, infrastructure, or culture. Add a short example or consequence to make it specific.

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because there is a lot of traffic and few safe bike lanes. For example, in my city many people prefer cars or motorbikes, so cycling feels unsafe and is mainly limited to parks or recreational areas.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student's reply uses present simple negative 'I don't have,' which is inconsistent. Use the past simple negative 'I didn't (have one)' to match the past tense. Suggestion: say 'No, I didn't' or 'No, I didn't have one.'

× No, I don't think so because of so much traffic.

✓ No, I don't think so because there is so much traffic.

The question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' is present tense; the student's reply begins correctly with 'I don't think so' but the clause 'because of so much traffic' is missing a verb and article. Add 'there is' to express existence and 'so much traffic' needs the verb to be grammatical. More natural: 'No, I don't think so because there is so much traffic' or 'No, I don't think so because traffic is heavy.'