自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 句子时态和语法错误较多，表达也不够连贯或具体。建议： 1) 注意时态一致（描述过去经历用过去时）。 2) 用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体细节支持（如何时得到、自行车的样子或你做了什么）。 3) 使用连接词（e.g. because, so, and）使句子更连贯。举例练习时把句子控制在不超过5句内。

示例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a small red bike when I was seven, and I loved it because it let me ride around the neighborhood with my friends. I practised riding every afternoon until I felt confident, so I could cycle to school by myself.

建议: 回答直接但不够具体，语法和数的一致性有问题。建议： 1) 用主题句直接回答并说明原因（例如交通、健康或方便）。 2) 提供具体细节或例子（比如在城市或乡村更常见，骑行的场合）。 3) 注意主谓一致和代词使用，使用连接词连接原因与例子。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work, especially in small towns where traffic is light.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child I very like it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I liked it very much.

句子中时态混用：第一部分描述过去经历应使用过去时（had），第二部分也应使用过去时（liked）。另外，'very like it' 是不正确的词序和用法，应改为 'liked it very much'。建议在叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时，形容喜好用法为 'like' 的过去式 'liked'，并将程度副词放在动词或形容词后面。

× It's my father bought for me and I will practice every day.

✓ My father bought it for me and I practiced every day.

原句中 'It's my father bought for me' 句式错误，应去掉多余的 'It's' 并使用过去时 'bought'；后半句 'I will practice every day' 与前文过去背景不一致，描述童年应使用过去时 'practiced'（或 'practised'）。建议叙述过去习惯时使用过去一般时。

× Yes, not only me, my friends are also have bikes.

✓ Yes, not only I, but my friends also have bikes.

原句中 'not only me' 用法不当，主语应使用主格 'I'；'are also have' 是主谓重复，应将系动词去掉，保留实义动词 'have'。建议使用完整结构 'not only I, but my friends also have...' 来表示并列主语。

× We are both like to ride bikes every day.

✓ We both like to ride bikes every day.

原句中多了系动词 'are'，导致时态和结构错误。表示习惯性动作用一般现在时 'like to' 即可。建议去掉 'are'，直接使用 'We both like to...'.