自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答方向正确，但可改进语法、流畅性与简洁性。避免重复（两次提到“think”与“risky/injured”），句子可更自然并加入连接词使逻辑更顺畅。建议控制在3-4句以内，第一句直接回答，之后简要解释并给出一两条具体细节。

示例: No, I didn't. I couldn't ride well as a child, so my parents thought it was too dangerous and never bought me one. For example, I fell off a bike once and injured my knee, which made them even more cautious.

建议: 回答总体清晰且有内容，但用词与表达可更自然、具体。注意搭配（say “choose bikes” 而非 “choose bike”），以及用更具体的数据或例子支持观点。连接词使用恰当，但最后一句可更简洁并改成更自然的表达。

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular. Many people use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, especially in crowded cities. For instance, the shared-bike schemes in my city have thousands of bikes and are widely used for commuting and running errands.

× I'm afraid not. When I was a child I was not good at riding, so my parents didn't buy a bike for me because they think I will get injured and they think having a bike is too risky for me.

✓ I'm afraid not. When I was a child I was not good at riding, so my parents didn't buy a bike for me because they thought I would get injured and they thought having a bike was too risky for me.

句中有时态不一致问题（Present tense issue）。句子描述的是过去的情形，主句用了过去时（was not good, didn't buy），所以后续的态度与推断也应使用过去时态。应将现在时 think 改为过去时 thought，将将来式 will get 改为过去将来/conditional 表达 would get，将 is too risky 改为过去时 was too risky。建议：在叙述过去事件时，保持所有相关动词时态一致，尽量把现在时的想法改为过去时。

× Sure, bikes are very popular in our country. A great number of people choose bike as their transportation for short journeys because of its convenience.

✓ Sure, bikes are very popular in our country. A great number of people choose bikes as their means of transportation for short journeys because of their convenience.

存在单复数和搭配问题（Singular and plural issue）。choose 后接宾语应与复数形式一致，原句用单数 bike 与主语 a great number of people 不搭配。transportation 前通常用 means of transportation 或直接 transportation；此外 convenience 应与复数主体对应，使用 their convenience 更合适。建议：注意主语与宾语在数的一致性，常用固定搭配如 "choose bikes"、"means of transportation"、"their convenience"。

× Besides, we also have a shared bike program in order to let more people get in touch.

✓ Besides, we also have a shared bike program in order to let more people get access to bikes.

原句使用 get in touch 表达不恰当（Verb + -ing form）。get in touch 通常表示与人取得联系，而不是“使用”或“接触（交通工具）”。这里需要一个与名词搭配的动词短语，如 get access to 或 use，且结构无需动名词形式。建议：根据语境选择恰当短语，如 "get access to bikes" 或 "use bikes"，以准确表达“更多人能使用共享单车”的意思。