自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Студент неправильно понял вопрос и ответил другим вопросом. Нужно внимательно слушать экзаменатора и отвечать напрямую; если не понял — вежливо попросить повторить. Также важно дать развёрнутый ответ (тема + детали) не более 5 предложений, без лишних слов-паразитов.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it to the park every weekend and learned basic tricks from my older cousin. Although it was simple, it was very important to me because it gave me independence and confidence.

建议: Ответ содержит много заполнителей («uh», «umm») и нечеткую причину; фраза о парковке непонятна. Нужно говорить увереннее, ясно формулировать причину и приводить конкретные примеры или сравнения. Используйте связующие слова (for example, however, because) и ограничьте ответ до 3–4 коротких предложений.

示例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for daily travel. For example, there are few bike lanes in cities, so cycling feels unsafe. However, some young people ride for exercise or on weekends.

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply does not answer the examiner's question and repeats a different noun. This is a sentence structure and relevance issue: the question asks about having a bike in the past, so the answer should use past simple (had) and the correct noun (bike). Suggestion: use 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.' to directly answer the question.

× Uh, in my opinion I don't think so because umm, people just uh, park in somewhere in July and after they don't bike.

✓ Uh, in my opinion I don't think so because people just give up in July and afterwards they don't ride bikes.

Multiple issues: 'park in somewhere' is incorrect preposition and verb choice for stopping cycling. Use 'give up in July' or 'stop cycling in July'. 'After' should be 'afterwards' or 'after that'. Also 'bike' as a verb in this context is informal; use 'ride bikes' or 'cycle'. Maintain present simple for general truth: 'people ... don't ride bikes.' Suggestion: 'people stop cycling in July and afterwards they don't ride bikes.'