自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct past-tense answer with one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense (past) and avoid single-word replies. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

示例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it almost every day to ride to my friends’ houses and the park. It helped me become more independent and improved my confidence on the road.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence stating your view, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar (present/past comparisons) and linking words (for example, however, although). Be concise and avoid repetition; aim for 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles have become more popular in recent years, especially since more people care about health and the environment. For example, cities have built more bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, but cars are still the main mode of transport for longer journeys or families with children.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'do' (present) is tense mismatch. Use 'did' to match the past context. Suggestion: Pay attention to the time frame in the question and make the verb tense agree; here use past simple 'did'.

× I think the last year years is more popular than for example 20/20/2010 but still is more popular going to car than a bike.

✓ I think in recent years bicycles have become more popular than they were around 2010, but people still prefer going by car rather than by bike.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect time expression ('the last year years'), wrong verb forms and tense, missing subjects, and awkward comparative structure. Corrections made: use 'in recent years' to express the period, 'have become' (present perfect) to indicate change over time, use a clear reference to 2010, and use 'people still prefer going by car rather than by bike' for a correct comparative and natural prepositions. Suggestion: Break complex ideas into shorter clauses, ensure correct time expressions, and use appropriate tense (present perfect for changes over a period).