自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a fuller, natural response with a topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid very short answers. Mention when you had it, who gave it, or a memory to make the reply concrete.

示例: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle from when I was about seven. It was a gift from my parents and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day, which helped me feel independent and confident.

建议: Avoid repeating the same phrase. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons or examples and use linking words (for example, because, also, especially). This will make your answer more informative and natural.

示例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and in recent years the government has added bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Yes, it's so popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The student used 'it' to refer to 'bikes', which is plural and requires the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Replace 'it's' with 'they are' and use 'very' instead of 'so' for a more natural response. Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs to the number (singular/plural) of the noun they refer to.

× It's very popular in my country.

✓ They are very popular in my country.

Again, 'it' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural. Use 'they are' to agree with the plural noun. Keep 'in my country' as the locative phrase. Suggestion: Ensure pronoun and verb agree with the noun's plurality; say 'They are very popular in my country.'