自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản, chia động từ và dùng thì phù hợp; trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết liên kết mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lại cấu trúc số tuổi (age) bằng tính từ sở hữu. Ví dụ cụ thể: nói rõ ai tặng, dịp nào, cảm xúc và một hành động bạn làm sau khi nhận xe. Dùng liên từ như “because”, “so” hoặc “then” để kết nối ý.

示例: Yes. My parents gave me a bike for my tenth birthday. I was very excited because it meant I could ride to my friend’s house on my own, so I practised riding every afternoon until I felt confident.

建议: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thêm 'are', 'it's', 'don't have enough money'), và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g. 'motorbikes', 'public transport', 'students') cùng liên từ để nối ý. Bổ sung một so sánh hoặc lý do cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu chính xác và mạch lạc.

示例: Not very popular for adults. Most adults prefer motorbikes or buses because they are faster and more convenient, but many students still ride bicycles to school because they can't afford motorbikes.

× When I was a child and my parents give me a bike in the birthday of my 10 years old.

✓ When I was a child my parents gave me a bike for my 10th birthday.

'give' should be past tense 'gave' because the action happened in the past. Use 'for my 10th birthday' rather than 'in the birthday of my 10 years old' and compress sentence order to be natural. Improvement: use simple past for completed past events and standard birthday phrasing.

× At the At this time I feel very interesting and I'm try to.

✓ At that time I felt very excited and I tried to ride it.

Use past simple 'felt' and 'tried' to match the past time reference 'At that time'. 'Interesting' describes something that causes interest; to express an emotion use 'excited'. Also complete the verb phrase: 'try to' needs an object or verb ('try to ride'). Improvement: keep past tense consistent and choose correct adjective for emotions.

× MMM I don't think so.

✓ Hmm, I don't think so.

This is stylistic; 'MMM' is nonstandard. Use 'Hmm' or 'Well' to show hesitation. Tense is correct for present opinion, so minimal change. Improvement: prefer 'Hmm' for clearer spoken hesitation.

× In my country people usually go uh to work by motorbike or bus because it convenient,

✓ In my country people usually go to work by motorbike or bus because it is convenient,

Missing pronoun/verb 'it is' before 'convenient'. Also remove filler 'uh' in written form. Improvement: include the subject and verb ('it is') when giving reasons.

× but students always use bikes to go to school because they didn't enough.

✓ but students always use bikes to go to school because they don't have enough money.

'didn't enough' is ungrammatical. Use 'don't have enough' to indicate lack in the present. Also specify what is lacking (e.g., 'money' or 'a motorbike'). Improvement: use correct auxiliary and verb ('do/does + have') and state the missing noun.