自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (e.g. "honestly") and be careful with grammar: use past tense for childhood. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit my friends and to explore my neighborhood, so I became quite skilled at handling hills and busy streets.

建议: Start with a clear statement, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and hesitations; ensure subject-verb agreement ("they are" or "bicycles are") and coherent sentence structure.

示例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are economical and the cities have many bike lanes.

× Yes, honestly, I'm very into it and very good at it.

✓ Yes, honestly, I was very into it and very good at it.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. Changing 'I'm' (present) to 'I was' matches the time reference. Also 'into' is informal but acceptable; keep 'into it' meaning interested in it. Suggestion: use past tense consistently when referring to childhood activities, e.g., 'I was very interested in it and was very good at it.'

× Yes, I think it's very popular.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular.

The student refers to 'bikes' (plural) from the examiner's question. 'It's' (it is) is singular and mis-matches the plural subject. Use 'they are' or 'they're' to agree with the plural noun. Suggestion: identify the noun being referred to and make the pronoun and verb agree in number: 'I think bikes are very popular' or 'I think they are very popular.'

× It's a spot that people really umm, into interest that it I see it everywhere that I go and it's so.

✓ They are an activity that people are really interested in; I see bikes everywhere I go.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect structure, wrong use of 'spot' for 'activity,' missing auxiliary verb for the passive/continuous ('people are really interested in'), and awkward repetition. Recast into two clear clauses: identify the subject 'bikes' (plural), use 'are' to match plurality, use the correct structure 'interested in' (verb + preposition), and remove filler words. Suggestion: simplify and divide long fragments into clear sentences, maintain subject-verb agreement and proper preposition use: 'Bikes are an activity that people are really interested in. I see bikes everywhere I go.'