自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và tự nhiên nhưng có thể cải thiện để hiệu quả hơn: (1) Dùng thì nhất quán (ví dụ dùng quá khứ cho toàn bộ mô tả), (2) Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể hơn về kỷ niệm (ví dụ một hoạt động hoặc nơi bạn thường đi), (3) Tránh lặp ý (ví dụ “fun” và “gave me a chance to spend time outdoors” hơi trùng). Hãy giữ tối đa 4–5 câu và dùng liên từ thích hợp để nối ý.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it to the nearby park with my friends in the afternoons. We would race along the path and stop to feed the ducks, which made those afternoons memorable.

建议: Câu trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng ảnh hưởng tới rõ ràng: (1) Sửa lỗi từ vựng/diễn đạt (“relative trip to maintain” và “doesn't coach much” không đúng) — nên nói “relatively inexpensive to maintain” và “it's easy and doesn't cost much”, (2) Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc số liệu nhỏ để tăng tính thuyết phục, (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc hơn, giữ 3–4 câu.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular, especially among students and young people. They are convenient for short trips and relatively inexpensive to maintain. For example, many students cycle to school to avoid traffic and save on transport costs.

× I really enjoy it because it was fun and gave me a chance to spend time outdoors.

✓ I really enjoyed it because it was fun and gave me a chance to spend time outdoors.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past context 'was' and 'gave'. All actions refer to childhood (past), so verbs should be past tense. Change 'enjoy' to 'enjoyed' to maintain consistent past tense. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent by using past tense for actions that happened in the past.

× they are also relative trip to maintain.

✓ they are also relatively cheap to maintain.

The original uses 'relative trip to maintain' which is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is that bikes are inexpensive to maintain; the correct adverb is 'relatively' modifying the adjective 'cheap'. Use 'cheap' for low cost and 'relatively' to indicate comparison. Suggestion: Use 'relatively cheap to maintain' to express lower maintenance cost.

× for example, many students ride bikes to school because it's a easy and doesn't coach much.

✓ For example, many students ride bikes to school because it's easy and doesn't cost much.

There are multiple issues: 'a easy' is incorrect because 'easy' is an adjective not requiring 'a' and begins with a vowel sound, so use no article ('it's easy'). 'doesn't coach much' uses wrong verb 'coach'; the correct verb is 'cost'. 'cost' fits the meaning of expense. Capitalize sentence start for formality. Suggestion: Remove the article before 'easy' and replace 'coach' with 'cost' to convey low expense.