自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more natural, concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "that time" and unnecessary repetition.

示例: Yes, I did. I loved riding my bike when I was a child because it was my main hobby and kept me active. For example, I would ride to the park every afternoon with my friends, which helped me build confidence and independence.

建议: Make your response clearer and more coherent: state your opinion directly, give a specific reason, and finish with a short prediction or hope using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "working is more popular") and avoid awkward phrasing like "I one day I hope."

示例: Not really. Bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorcycles for commuting due to long distances and poor cycling infrastructure. However, I hope that in the future cities will improve bike lanes and more people will choose cycling for short trips.

× It was my hobby that time and I'm really grateful to my parents that they bought me a bike.

✓ It was my hobby at that time, and I'm really grateful to my parents for buying me a bike.

The sentence has issues with preposition choice and verb form after expressions of gratitude. Use 'at that time' to refer to a past period. After 'grateful to someone', use 'for' plus a verb-ing form ('for buying') rather than 'that they bought'. This creates a more natural and grammatically correct structure. Suggestion: say 'at that time' and use 'for' + gerund when explaining why you are grateful.'

× No, I don't really think that bikes are popular in my country. Working is much popular here, so I one day I hope that it will be much more popular and our cities will be more convenient for cycling.

✓ No, I don't really think that bikes are popular in my country. Cycling is not very popular here, so I hope that one day it will become much more popular and our cities will be more convenient for cycling.

Problems: 'Working is much popular' is incorrect in meaning and word choice; likely intended 'cycling' or 'bicycling'. 'Much popular' is not natural—use 'very popular' or 'much more popular' with a comparative. Word order 'so I one day I hope' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'I hope that one day it will become much more popular.' Also change 'working' to the correct noun 'cycling' and use 'become' to indicate change of state. Suggestion: replace 'working' with 'cycling', remove redundant 'I', place 'one day' before clause or after 'hope', and use 'become much more popular.'