自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答过短且不具体。需要用主题句直接回答并补充细节（如什么时候有、是谁给的、骑车的频率或记忆），并使用连接词使表达连贯。最多五句。建议用更正式的口语代替“Yeah”。

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven; it was a small red bicycle my parents bought me for my birthday. I rode it almost every day after school, usually around the neighborhood with my friends, which helped me feel independent and confident.

建议: 回答笼统且缺乏支持细节。应先直接给出观点，然后用具体原因或例子支持（如城市通勤、学生使用、共享单车的普及），并用连接词连接观点与理由。保持自然且不冗长。

示例: Yes, I think they are very popular. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes in cities because public transport can be crowded, and bike-sharing schemes have made cycling more convenient. As a result, you often see lots of commuters and students cycling to work or school.

× Yeah.

✓ Yeah.

该句为口语简短回答，语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, of course.

✓ Yes, of course.

该句为口语简短肯定回答，语法正确，无需修改。