自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and grammar (past simple for childhood), avoid repetition, and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly. Mention the legal restriction clearly and briefly. Aim for 2–3 sentences, each grammatically complete.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. In my country young people are not allowed to ride motorbikes until they are 18 because a licence is required, so my family never bought one for me.

建议: Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because', 'so', 'therefore'). Use correct verb forms and fewer fillers. Provide concrete details (e.g. cost of cars, rural use, traffic) and keep to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Because cars are expensive, many people—especially in small towns—use motorcycles or bicycles for daily transport, so you can see them everywhere on the roads.

× No, I didn't have to buy when I have the when I have child because in my country they don't allow for the kids can driving the bike under 18 years old.

✓ No, I didn't have one when I was a child because in my country they don't allow kids to ride a bike under 18 years old.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'didn't have to buy' is incorrect for stating possession; use 'didn't have one' for past possession. 'when I have the when I have child' mixes present and is ungrammatical; use past 'when I was a child'. 'they don't allow for the kids can driving' mixes modal/infinitive and progressive forms; correct form is 'they don't allow kids to ride'. Suggestions: use simple past for childhood statements, use 'have one' for possession, use 'allow + someone + to + base verb'.

× That's why we we need the license before we driving the bike.

✓ That's why we need a license before we drive a bike.

Pronoun and verb form issues: duplicate 'we we' should be single 'we'. 'the license' is too specific; use 'a license' for general requirement. 'before we driving' incorrectly uses -ing after auxiliary; use base verb 'drive' after time conjunctions like 'before'. Suggestions: remove duplicate words, use indefinite article for general items, and use base verb after 'before'.

× Yep, I growing up in the small town and the bike very popular in my country you can found the bike everywhere on the road because the car is so expensive in my back home that's why we don't have any much people have the car.

✓ Yes, I grew up in a small town and bikes are very popular in my country; you can find them everywhere on the road because cars are very expensive back home, so not many people have cars.

Tense and agreement errors: 'I growing up' needs past tense 'I grew up'. 'the bike very popular' lacks verb and number agreement; use 'bikes are very popular'. 'you can found' should be 'you can find' (base verb). 'the car is so expensive in my back home' is awkward; use 'cars are very expensive back home'. 'we don't have any much people have the car' is ungrammatical; 'not many people have cars' is correct. Suggestions: use simple past for upbringing, ensure subject-verb agreement and plural nouns for general statements, use correct verb forms after modals/auxiliaries, and simplify sentence structure.

× The bike is very.

✓ The bike is very common.

Sentence is incomplete: 'The bike is very.' lacks an adjective to complete the comparison. Context suggests 'common' or 'popular'. Suggestion: finish the sentence with an appropriate adjective such as 'common' or 'popular' to convey meaning.