自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết bổ sung (tối đa 5 câu), dùng từ nối để mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: when, because, so, for example). Chú ý dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., bicycle, ride, neighborhood, learn) và tránh lặp lại câu hỏi.

示例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old. I used it to ride around my neighborhood with my friends after school, which helped me become more independent. For example, I often rode to the local park every Saturday, and that routine continued until I was a teenager.

建议: Câu trả lời lại là sự lặp câu hỏi và sai ngữ pháp. Cần trả lời trực tiếp với ý kiến rõ ràng rồi giải thích vì sao, dùng từ nối để liên kết ý (e.g., however, because, for instance). Thêm thông tin cụ thể về mức độ phổ biến, nơi sử dụng (thành phố/ nông thôn) hoặc lý do (giao thông, chi phí). Giữ tối đa 5 câu, tránh lặp lại cấu trúc câu hỏi.

示例: Yes, bicycles are fairly popular in my country, especially in rural areas and among students. Because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips, many people use them for commuting to school or the market. However, in big cities, motorcycles and cars are more common due to longer distances and traffic conditions.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure and pragmatic error: the expected response should be a statement, not a question. Suggestion: answer in a complete sentence matching the past tense of the question, for example 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Ensure the verb tense (past) matches the question.

× Do you think of bikes? Bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's reply contains repetition and incorrect question formation. The correct structure for asking about opinion is a single question: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Suggestion: use one question clause with subject and verb in present simple; avoid inserting 'of' after 'think' when followed by a clause (we say 'think + clause', not 'think of + clause' here).