自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense correctly, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences) and use linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Also replace vague phrases like "that kind of stuff" with specific reasons (e.g., "dangerous", "expensive").

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents preferred I focus on other sports. For example, I took running and tennis lessons from age seven to twelve, so they thought cycling might be risky and distract me.

建议: Make the response more natural and specific: use plural/singular agreement, add one concrete example or reason, and link ideas with words like "because" or "for example." Keep it brief and avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, many students cycle to school and teenagers often ride bikes in parks for sport and leisure.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child because it wasn't my sport and the sport that I have when I was a child is run tennis and my parents don't want me like that kind of stuff.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because it wasn't my sport, and the sports I did as a child were running and tennis, and my parents didn't want me to do those kinds of things.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past tense consistently for events in childhood (didn't have, weren't, did, didn't want). 'Have' should be 'have'->'had' and 'is'->'were' to match plural 'sports'. 'Run tennis' is incorrect word choice and order; use 'running and tennis'. 'Don't want me like that kind of stuff' is ungrammatical; use 'didn't want me to do those kinds of things'. Improve by keeping tense consistent (past) and using correct verb forms and noun phrases. Suggested practice: rewrite sentences about past events using past simple for all main verbs and list activities with correct nouns (running, tennis).

× Yes, it's popular. A lot of kids and teenager have a bike they use. They use them as a sport or a vehicle to go on places that they need to.

✓ Yes, they're popular. A lot of kids and teenagers have bikes that they use. They use them for sport or as a vehicle to go to places they need to.

Several present-tense and agreement issues: 'it's popular' refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'they're popular'. 'A lot of kids and teenager' mixes plural/singular; use 'teenagers'. 'Have a bike' should be plural 'have bikes' when speaking generally. 'They use them as a sport' is better as 'for sport' and 'to go on places' is incorrect preposition and word order; use 'to go to places'. Also 'that they need to' should be 'they need to' or 'they need'. Improve by ensuring subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions ('to places', 'for sport'). Suggested practice: check plural subjects and match plural verbs/pronouns; prefer 'for sport' or 'as a sport' depending on meaning.