自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Correct the grammar and give a direct, natural response. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add one or two brief supporting details. Use past tense and avoid repetition. For example, say why you didn’t have a bike (cost, parents’ decision, safety) and mention if you wished you had one or rode other things.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on busy roads, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. I sometimes wished I had one because a bike would have made it easier to visit friends.

建议: Make the answer more precise and fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and examples using linking words (because, for example, also). Replace filler words and vague phrases with concrete details about who uses bikes, where they are popular, and why (e.g. environment, traffic, bike lanes). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country nowadays because many people want a cheaper and greener way to travel. For example, cities have built new bike lanes and shared-bike services, so students and commuters often cycle to work or university.

× No, I haven't my bike when I I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present perfect contraction 'haven't' incorrectly with a past time expression ('when I was a child'). Use past simple for completed past events: 'didn't have'. Also remove the duplicated 'I' and add the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: practice forming negative past simple with 'did not/didn't + base verb' and avoid present perfect with specific past time expressions.

× Yeah, it is very popular nowadays.

✓ Yeah, they are very popular nowadays.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student replied with 'it is', which is singular. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to agree with 'bikes'. Suggestion: Identify the subject (singular/plural) and choose correct pronoun and verb form.

× People are umm, people are sourcing a new facilities and everything.

✓ People are, um, seeking new facilities and everything.

The verb 'sourcing' is awkward here; 'seeking' (or 'looking for') is more natural. 'A new facilities' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'facilities'—remove 'a'. Also avoid repeating 'people are' unnecessarily. Suggestion: use 'seeking' or 'looking for' and ensure article and noun number match ('new facilities' without 'a').

× I think. Yeah, it is popular.

✓ I think so. Yeah, they are popular.

Again, 'it is' refers to singular, but the topic is plural 'bikes', so use 'they are'. Also 'I think.' is better as 'I think so.' to link ideas. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to the subject and use short linking phrases like 'I think so' for clarity.