自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, grammatical and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail. Correct verb forms and remove unnecessary articles ("the a bike"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" properly. Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride a bike when I was about 13, so my family didn't buy one for me earlier. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with correct sentence structure and linking words. Avoid sentence fragments and explain why bikes are popular (policies, convenience, environment). Use vocabulary like "promote", "cycling", "infrastructure" and provide one brief example.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because the government actively promotes cycling. For example, many cities have built bike lanes and public bike-sharing systems, which makes cycling a convenient and eco-friendly option for short trips.

× Actually not, because I learned how to ride the a bike when I was about 13 years old, so my family didn't needed to buy a.

✓ Actually not, because I learned how to ride a bike when I was about 13 years old, so my family didn't need to buy one.

Errors: extra definite article 'the' before 'a bike' and wrong past auxiliary verb form 'didn't needed'. Use 'a bike' (indefinite article) once; remove 'the'. For negative past simple use 'didn't' + base verb, so 'didn't need'. Also replace the trailing 'a.' with 'one' to refer back to 'bike'. Suggestion: say 'I learned how to ride a bike when I was about 13, so my family didn't need to buy one.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, of course Chinese people are encouraged to. By bike because government recommend.

✓ Yes, of course many Chinese people are encouraged to ride bikes because the government recommends it.

Multiple issues: sentence fragments and missing verbs/objects. 'Encouraged to.' is incomplete; needs the verb 'ride' and the object 'bikes'. 'By bike' misplaced; move into clause 'to ride bikes'. 'Government recommend' lacks definite article 'the' and wrong verb form for third person singular; should be 'the government recommends'. Also add 'many' to sound natural. Suggestion: 'Yes, of course many Chinese people are encouraged to ride bikes because the government recommends it.' Grammar problem type ID:26