自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: - Sai ngữ pháp (thì và động từ) và phát âm một vài từ (bike -> bite). - Câu trả lời lặp ý và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng; nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm chi tiết cụ thể với từ nối. - Nên dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Ví dụ: nêu tuổi khi có xe, một sự kiện đáng nhớ, cảm xúc của bố mẹ. - Luyện phát âm từ quan trọng (bike, broke, worried) và thì quá khứ khi kể chuyện.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven. I remember once I broke it while riding down a small hill, so my mother was very worried that I might hurt myself. After that, she insisted I wear a helmet and practised with me until I felt safer.

建议: - Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi (về mức phổ biến của xe đạp). Thay vào đó bạn kể lại trải nghiệm cá nhân lặp lại. - Cần trả lời trực tiếp: nêu ý kiến (có/không + mức độ) rồi bổ sung lý do cụ thể và ví dụ. - Chú ý ngữ pháp: thì quá khứ và số nhiều (mother was, not were); từ vựng chính xác (ride/ride down, break/broke). - Giữ tối đa 5 câu, sử dụng liên từ (because, for example, however) để mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns and among students because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles to go to school or the market, and cities are building more bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× I have a bite when I was 7 years old and I remember in the past I broke this bike up and my mother's worry about it and she umm.

✓ I had a bike when I was 7 years old, and I remember I once broke that bike and my mother was worried about it.

The student used 'have' with a past time expression 'when I was 7 years old'; in English, simple past 'had' should be used (past tense error). 'Bite' is a misspelling of 'bike' (word choice). 'Broke this bike up' is unnatural; use 'broke that bike' (phrasal verb misuse). 'my mother's worry about it' mixes present noun form and tense; use past 'my mother was worried'. Use consistent past tense for events that happened in the past. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past events, correct spelling 'bike', and use 'was worried' for past state.

× I had a break when I was seven years old. I remember I once broke it while writing down a small hill and my mother were very worried that I might hurt myself.

✓ I had a bike when I was seven years old. I remember I once fell while riding down a small hill and my mother was very worried that I might hurt myself.

Multiple errors: 'had a break' is incorrect word choice; should be 'had a bike' (vocabulary). 'writing down a small hill' is incorrect verb and preposition; correct phrase is 'riding down a small hill' (verb and preposition error). 'I once broke it' is odd for falling; better to say 'I once fell' or 'I broke it' if speaking of the bike itself. 'my mother were very worried' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and tense; use 'my mother was very worried' (third person singular requires 'was'). Suggestion: use accurate verbs for activities (ride, fall), correct prepositions ('down'), and match subject-verb agreement in past tense.