自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence; keep it natural and concise. Correct tense and noun forms: say “when I was a child” and “a bike” or “any bikes.” A good answer should be 1–2 sentences, directly answering then briefly explaining if needed.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to nearby places instead.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g. “when I was a child,” “couldn't afford,” “we went to school by bicycle or on foot”). Avoid fillers like “uh” and redundant phrases.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips in cities, and when I was a child my family couldn't afford one, so we usually walked to school instead.

× No, I didn't have any bike in my child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood.

The expression 'any bike' is odd in this context; 'a bike' is correct because the speaker refers to having one or none (singular). Also 'in my child' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'childhood'. Use 'a' for a singular, countable noun and the correct noun form 'childhood'. Suggestion: say 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child' or 'I didn't have a bike in my childhood.'

× Yeah, bikes are popular in my country, but when I was child, uh, my family didn't afford this type of vehicle.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in my country, but when I was a child, my family couldn't afford this type of vehicle.

Missing article before 'child' ('a child') and incorrect verb phrase 'didn't afford' — English uses 'afford' with a modal-like structure 'couldn't afford' to indicate inability in the past. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal speech. Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' and 'couldn't afford'.

× So usually we go, we are going to school by, uh, school by bicycle or walking.

✓ So usually we went to school by bicycle or walked.

The student shifts awkwardly between present and progressive forms. The question asks about the past, so use past simple: 'we went' and 'walked'. Also 'by bicycle' is the correct prepositional phrase; 'school by bicycle' is redundant. Suggestion: say 'we went to school by bicycle or walked.'