自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap kısa, doğrudan ve doğal, ancak daha fazla ayrıntı ve bağlayıcı sözcük ekleyerek konuşmayı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. Örneğin neden bisikletleri istemenizin sebeplerini, alternatif aktivitelerinizi veya bisiklete sahip olmamanın sonuçlarını belirtin. Ayrıca 'would have liked to have one' ifadesini daha basit ve doğal bir yapı ile değiştirebilirsiniz (örn. 'I wanted one').

示例: No, I didn't. I wanted a bike because I enjoyed playing outside and wanted to ride to my friends' houses. However, my parents couldn't afford one, so I mostly played football and walked instead.

建议: Cevap iyi bir gözleme dayanıyor fakat dolgu kelimeleri ('uh') fazla ve cümle tamamlanmamış. Bağlayıcı kelimeler kullanarak daha akıcı ve daha spesifik örnekler verin (sıklık, yerler, amaçlar). Ayrıca 'driving their bikes' yerine 'riding their bikes' tercih edin ve cümleyi net şekilde bitirin.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. For example, I often see people cycling in parks and along rivers, especially on weekends. Families ride together and many students use bikes to go to school because it's cheap and healthy.

× No, I didn't. I would have liked to have one, but my parents didn't buy a bike for me.

✓ No, I didn't. I would have liked to have had one, but my parents didn't buy a bike for me.

The phrase 'would have liked to have one' mixes conditional perfect with a simple noun; the correct form is 'would have liked to have had one' to express a past unreal desire. Use 'would have liked to have had' or simply 'would have liked to have' followed by a past participle; here 'had' functions as the past participle of 'have'. Suggestion: Say 'I would have liked to have had one' or more simply 'I would have liked to have a bike' if referring to a past desire.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because, uh, during the day when I'm outside, I usually see uh, people from different age groups are riding their bikes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because during the day when I'm outside, I usually see people from different age groups riding their bikes.

The clause 'I usually see people ... are riding their bikes' wrongly uses a full verb phrase after 'see'. After verbs of perception like 'see', use the bare participle for continuing actions: 'see people riding'. Also unnecessary filler 'uh' should be removed in written answers. Suggestion: Use 'I usually see people from different age groups riding their bikes.'

× Sometimes family, uh, mother, father and child are driving their bikes together and.

✓ Sometimes families — mother, father and child — ride their bikes together.

Several issues: 'family' as a singular collective noun with plural context should be pluralized to 'families' or rephrased; 'are driving their bikes' incorrectly uses 'drive' for bicycles (use 'ride'), and the sentence fragments ends with 'and.' making it incomplete. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Say 'Sometimes families, like a mother, father and child, ride their bikes together.'