自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct, grammatically correct and provide a bit of detail. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Also keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without training wheels by the age of seven.

建议: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons in coherent sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, also) and avoid filler words like "uh". Be precise about the reasons (health, environment, cost) and give a short example or result to make your answer concrete.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because people are more health-conscious and concerned about the environment. For example, many commuters choose cycling for short trips to reduce pollution and stay fit, so city centers now have more bike lanes and rental schemes.

× Yes, I have a bike. When you were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had'. Also the fragment 'When you were a child.' is incorrect in reference and structure; it should be 'when I was a child' attached to the sentence. Suggestion: match the tense and referent to the question by saying 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays people uh, are getting aware of health issues and some uh, natural. So no, some natural sources problems.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays people are becoming more aware of health issues and some natural resource problems.

The response mixes broken phrases and incorrect word forms. Use 'are becoming' or 'are getting' plus 'more aware' for present progressive awareness. 'Some natural' is incomplete; likely intended 'natural resource problems'. Also remove fillers and 'So no,' which contradicts the affirmation. Suggestion: streamline to 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays people are becoming more aware of health issues and natural resource problems.'