自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap daha doğru zaman kullanımı ve daha doğal yapı ile geliştirilmeli. Şu anki cümlede zaman uyumsuzluğu ve fazla bağlaç kullanımı var. İlk cümlede geçmiş zamanı kullanın (had). Ayrıca neden sevmediğinizi kısa bir sebep verin ve 2-3 cümleyi geçmeyecek şekilde destekleyin. Bağlaç olarak simple connectors (because, so, but) ve bir bağlam belirten kelime (for example, when I was young) kullanın.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn’t enjoy riding it because I was afraid of falling. For example, I preferred walking to school with my friends rather than cycling.

建议: Cevap daha açık ve tutarlı olmalı; şu an zaman ve kişi uyumsuzluğu var (you’re). Önce genel görüşü net bir topic sentence ile verin, sonra örnek veya neden ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (however, although, but) ve zaman uyumlu ifadeler (when I visit the seaside / on the coast) kullanın. Detaylandırmak için örnek veya karşılaştırma ekleyin.

示例: Not really — cycling isn’t very common in my country because public transport is widely used. However, biking becomes popular in coastal towns; for instance, people often rent bikes to ride along the seaside during summer holidays.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a kid and but I don't like to drive a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid, but I didn't like to ride it.

The student mixes present and past tenses. 'Have' should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Don't like' should be past 'didn't like'. Also 'drive a bike' is unnatural; use 'ride a bike'. Use 'it' to refer back to 'a bike'. Improve by keeping past tense consistently for past events and choosing correct verbs for activities. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Not too much, but it was fun whenever you're seaside.

✓ Not too much, but it was fun whenever you were at the seaside.

The student mixes present 'you're' with past 'was'. To speak about past general experiences, use past tense 'were'. Also add preposition 'at' before 'the seaside'. Keep tense consistent and include appropriate prepositions. Grammar problem type ID: 6