自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a direct topic sentence and add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Mention when or where you had the bike, what kind it was, and a brief memory or reason to enrich the answer.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, my parents felt it was safe for me to learn to ride on quiet streets.

建议: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence, then add linked, specific supporting details (use linking words like 'for example', 'also', 'in addition') and a brief insight or comparison to make it more informative and natural. Avoid minor grammar errors and redundant phrasing.

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities and towns, because they are inexpensive and convenient for short journeys. For example, many students work as delivery couriers and rely on bikes to navigate narrow streets quickly. In addition, cycling is often faster than cars in congested areas, so many people prefer it for daily errands.

× For example, many student delivery workers use bicycle.

✓ For example, many student delivery workers use bicycles.

The noun 'bicycle' should be plural when referring to many workers each using one; this is a singular/plural agreement issue. Change 'bicycle' to 'bicycles' to match the plural subject 'many student delivery workers'. Suggestion: ensure count nouns are plural after quantifiers like 'many' or plural subjects.