自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and use the correct tense. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two specific details about the bike (what it looked like, how you used it, or a memorable moment). Use linking words if you add more than one detail. Avoid repeating the same idea.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a red mountain bike that I rode to the park every afternoon with my friends. Because it had thick tires, it was easy to ride on rough paths, and I remember learning to do small jumps on it.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and a short example. Use linking words (for example, because, however, therefore) and avoid repetition. Be careful with article use and word choice (say “cars” instead of “their car” and “public transport” instead of naming multiple forms awkwardly).

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience and status. For example, commuting distances and hot weather make cycling uncomfortable for many, so they choose to drive instead.

× Yes, I have. Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used 'I have' (present perfect) incorrectly when asked about a past situation. The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' requires a past simple response. Combining 'Yes, I have. Yes, I had.' is inconsistent. Use 'Yes, I had a bike.' to match the past tense and provide a complete sentence. Suggestion: Use past simple for finished past situations (I had, I went, I played).

× I think bikes are not popular in my country because most people prefer to use their car, not any train or buses.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country because most people prefer to use their cars, not trains or buses.

There is a mismatch between singular and plural nouns: 'their car' should be 'their cars' to agree with the plural possessor 'most people'. 'Not any train or buses' mixes singular and plural forms; use the plural 'trains or buses' or singular consistently. Suggestion: Ensure number agreement between subjects, possessives and nouns (their + plural noun when subject is plural).

× They prefer to drive by their cars.

✓ They prefer to drive their cars.

The phrase 'drive by their cars' uses an incorrect preposition 'by' and a redundant plural after 'drive'. The correct verb-object structure is 'drive their cars'. Suggestion: Omit 'by' when using 'drive' with a direct object; say 'drive a car' or 'drive their cars'.