自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a direct answer then add 1–2 supporting details (who gave it to you, how often you used it, or a short memory). Use linking words like “actually” or “when” to make it coherent. Keep it to no more than 4–5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it almost every day after school. Actually, learning to ride it was difficult at first, but within a week I stopped using the training wheels and felt very proud.

建议: Provide a direct answer then expand with specific reasons or examples and use linking words (for example, because, so, in particular). Mention who uses bikes (students, commuters) or where they are popular, and keep it concise and natural.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many students and office workers use bicycles to avoid traffic, and in recent years bike-sharing programs have made them even more common.

× Yes, it is popular here in our country.

✓ Yes, they are popular here in our country.

The pronoun 'it' is singular and refers to a singular noun, but 'bikes' is plural in the question, so a plural pronoun 'they' must be used. Also ensure verb agrees with the plural subject: use 'are' not 'is'. To improve, identify the number (singular/plural) of the noun being referred to and choose matching pronouns and verb forms (e.g., 'it is' for singular, 'they are' for plural).