自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Mejorar la gramática y la naturalidad. Debes usar el tiempo pasado simple para hechos en la infancia (I didn't have). Evita estructuras negativas con present perfect cuando hablas de un periodo terminado. Añade una oración adicional breve que dé una razón o detalle para enriquecer la respuesta, usando una palabra de enlace simple si es necesario.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe, so I learned to ride only when I was a teenager.

建议: Mejorar la claridad, organización y precisión. Comienza con una frase principal clara (Yes/No + brief opinion), luego añade una razón y un example concreto usando conectores como 'however' o 'mainly'. Evita muletillas (umm, repeated words) y completa la idea con un ejemplo específico (por ejemplo: estudiantes, mensajeros).

示例: I think bikes are moderately popular, but mainly among people who exercise or cycle as a hobby. However, most commuters use cars and public transport, so bicycles are not a common choice for daily travel except among students and delivery couriers.

× No, I haven't had a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

This sentence has a tense error: it uses the present perfect ('haven't had') with a specific past time ('when I was a child'). Use the simple past ('didn't have') for finished actions at a definite time in the past. Suggestion: use simple past for events tied to a past period (e.g., 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.').

× Well I think they are but actually just for people who train but not as usual.

✓ Well, I think they are popular, but actually mainly among people who train; they are not that common otherwise.

The student’s sentence has problems with verb usage and sentence structure in present tense. 'I think they are' is vague and followed by mismatched clauses. Use a clear present simple structure for general truths: 'I think they are popular, but mainly among people who train.' Also replace 'as usual' with 'that common' or 'common for everyday use.' Add commas and a semicolon to separate ideas. Suggestion: keep present simple for general statements and use clearer connectors (but, however, mainly).

× Umm move transportation for for a normal people to go to work or something like that.

✓ Um, they are not used as everyday transportation for normal people to go to work or anything like that.

This fragment has sentence structure and word choice problems. 'Move transportation' is ungrammatical; use 'used as everyday transportation.' 'A normal people' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'normal people' or 'ordinary people.' Ensure subject and verb are present: 'they are not used as...'. Suggestion: restructure the sentence into a full clause with correct noun forms and verb 'used.'

× They they they bikes are just used for.

✓ Bikes are just used for training or recreation.

This sentence is incomplete and redundant ('They they they'). It lacks an object after 'used for.' Provide the activity: 'used for training or recreation.' Remove repeated words and form a complete clause. Suggestion: avoid filler repetitions and finish the thought with the intended purpose.