自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, trực tiếp vào câu hỏi ban đầu (có hay không). Hãy dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi cung cấp chi tiết hỗ trợ liên quan. Tránh lặp từ và lỗi thì (quá khứ/hiện tại). Sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, so, because). Ví dụ cụ thể: nêu tuổi bạn, hoàn cảnh và hoạt động liên quan đến việc đi bộ thay vì đi xe đạp. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

示例: I didn't have a bike when I was a child, so I usually walked instead. For example, I often played and did light exercise by the canal near my house, which made walking convenient. Consequently, I never learned to ride a bike.

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần mạch lạc và đúng ngữ pháp; bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + brief reason). Tránh từ không rõ (PO, table) và sửa thì/ngôi (singular/plural). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh để làm rõ lý do (giá rẻ, tiện lợi, cho học sinh). Dùng liên từ như 'because', 'for example' để nối ý. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars or do not have driving licenses. For example, students and children often cycle to school since it is cheap and convenient for short trips.

× Actually, I don't know how to ride a bike, so I prefer walking.

✓ Actually, I don't know how to ride a bike, so I prefer walking.

No correction needed for tense here; the sentence correctly uses present simple to express a general state and a preference. Suggestion: keep as is. Use present simple for habits and general truths.

× Uh, when I was a child I used to work around the canal near my house.

✓ Uh, when I was a child I used to play around the canal near my house.

The original uses 'work' which conflicts with the context of a child and the phrase 'used to' expresses a past habitual action correctly. Replacing 'work' with 'play' better matches the intended meaning. 'Used to' is correctly in the past tense.

× I go jogging, working out.

✓ I went jogging and worked out.

The context is past (when I was a child), so verbs should be in past tense. Using base form + -ing 'go jogging' and 'working out' is inconsistent with the previous past-time reference. Change to past simple 'went' and 'worked' to match tense and parallel structure.

× In my opinion, I think bike is popular in my PO in my country because uh not everybody have driving license so it should table for the own or a child or a student to go somewhere.

✓ In my opinion, I think bikes are popular in my country because not everybody has a driving license, so they are suitable for adults, children, or students to get around.

Multiple errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to refer generally (subject-verb agreement), so use 'bikes are'. 'Have' should be 'has' with singular 'everybody' (subject-verb agreement). 'Driving license' is fine but needs an article in some varieties; 'a driving license' is acceptable. The phrase 'should table for the own' is incorrect and unclear; replace with 'they are suitable for adults' to convey meaning. Use parallel nouns 'adults, children, or students'. Also change 'to go somewhere' to 'to get around' for natural phrasing.