自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Жауабыңызды нақты әрі табиғи қылып жасаңыз; сөйлем құрылымын және грамматиканы түзетіңіз. Мысалы, бұрын велосипед болмағаныңызды анық айтыңыз, себебін неге ұнатпағаныңызды түсіндіріңіз және қосымша мәлімет үшін бір не екі шақты себеп беріңіз. Қате формаларды (мысалы, “didn't like”, “so scary and thrilling”, “didn't interesting”) түзетіп, байланыстырушы сөздер (because, so, therefore, however) қолданыңыз. Мүмкіндік болса, өткен шақ пен эмоцияны нақты көрсетіңіз.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of falling. Riding seemed dangerous and I preferred walking or using public transport. As I grew older I became more confident, but I still rarely ride a bike.

建议: Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, пікіріңіздің себебін анықтаңыз. Салыстыру жасау қажет болса, «in my country» және «in other countries» деп нақты көрсетіңіз. Грамматика мен сөз тәртібін түзетіп, сәйкес сөздерді пайдаланыңыз (popular, common, expensive, useful). Байланыстырушы сөздер арқылы сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде жалғаңыз (for example, because, however, in contrast).

示例: I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country, but they are much more common in some other countries. For example, in cities like Amsterdam people use bikes for daily commuting because it’s cheap and convenient, whereas here many people prefer cars or public transport.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't like.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't like them.

The verb tense is past, but the sentence lacks an object after 'like'. The pronoun 'them' (referring to bikes) is needed. Use past tense 'didn't like' with the appropriate object to complete the meaning.

× I was so scary and thrilling.

✓ I found them so scary and thrilling.

The original uses 'I was' with adjectives that describe bikes, not the speaker. Use a reporting verb like 'found' plus the adjectives to show the speaker's reaction. This keeps past tense consistent.

× It's so challenging and didn't interesting for me.

✓ They were so challenging and not interesting to me.

Mixes present 'It's' with past 'didn't' and uses incorrect adjective form. Keep past tense: 'They were'. Use 'not interesting' instead of 'didn't interesting' and 'to me' for correct phrasing.

× Maybe I think bikes are popular in other country because I don't like bikes.

✓ Maybe I think bikes are popular in other countries because I don't like them.

Use plural 'countries' when speaking generally. Replace 'bikes' repeated by pronoun 'them'. Maintain present tense 'are' for general truth.

× It is bikes a popular expensive in other country.

✓ Bikes are expensive and popular in other countries.

Incorrect word order and singular/plural errors. Use subject 'Bikes are' then adjectives 'expensive and popular'. Use plural 'countries' for general reference.

× Bikes are popular but useful in other people.

✓ Bikes are popular but not useful for some people.

Original misuses 'in other people'. Use 'for some people' to indicate usefulness to people and add 'not' if contrasting popularity with usefulness.